Welcome to the forum Nathaniel!
For being a novice in recording, you've done an excellent job on this track. All instruments were cleanly recorded, especially the vocals and acoustic were tracked very well. I agree with Bill on the bass.......also, possibly easing up on the compression and/or EQing might help reduce that muffled snare.....needs a little more sparkle.
Very good thing you got going here Nathaniel and would love to hear more your stuff.