Hi All,
This is a simple kind of song, but I thought I'd take a chance and see how it fares here.
Hope it doesn't bore the socks off ya, or there'll be a bunch more barefooted songwriters cakewalking around.
https://soundcloud.com/laura-thomson-723335445/not-used-nov2016
 
Thanks very much,
LJ

I pictured your white cat singing this.  She looks like she'd be sultry.  I really like your songwriting.  I find myself sketching out the form.  It's always very inventive.  Congratulations on finishing another great tune!

Cool little song.

Nice performance... Typically skinnybones lampshade

Laura, now you've done it. You've gone ahead and continued with being your own person.
 
Loved it.

You have certain Kate Bush qualities with your vocal, which is OK.  Nice tune, nicely sung and played.  For me the mix felt narrow, perhaps spread thing out a little.  Thanks for sharing.

Thank you to you all for the comments!
eph221, my white cat would have appreciated that :)
Synkrotron, thanks for your support :)
bapu, I seem to keep being myself no matter how I try not to be. :)
Wookiee, thanks for the tip about the mix. I've definitely heard OF Kate Bush, but I'm not sure I've ever heard her sing. I should check her out.

Thanks again,
LJ

Lovely voice, great little tune, well produced. Really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.

Yea cool I like it ! Your vocals fit perfectly with this music you created , nice piece of work !
 
J.S.

Still one of a kind, Laura! Can't say a bad thing about it.
 

This is my favorite of all the tunes of yours that I've heard.  It makes excellent use of your unique vocal abilities.  The song comes across really well despite some production shortcomings.  Laura, you should really consider letting someone help you on the production side.  I saw where James Yoyo volunteered, and I'm sure there are others who would be happy to help, myself included.  It would make a big difference in the finished product.