jsaras
Hi Rus,
I'll keep my comments as brief as possible.
You were so busy trying to impose the "forest" of rules that govern tonal harmony onto my piece that you missed the "sun".
Measures 3-10 were composed using major triads descending by major seconds; C, Bb, Ab, Gb, E, D, C. Similarly, measures 15-22 are major triads descending by minor seconds; C, B, Bb, A, Ab, G, Gb. Neither of those progressions exist in tonal harmony. Major and minor triads have eleven possible root/bass structures that can be placed underneath them. Mine were chosen randomly without any deference to a tonal center.
I used correct voice leading with the triads (no parallel intervals) so I managed to completely deceive you. You may want to analyze the passing tones I used to see if there's any other symmetry involved.
Gotcha! ;-D
Hmmm, not so sure :-)
This conversation is slightly funny as both of you seem too intent on one position to see the other. While you may be right that Rus didn't wow you with an explanation, you equally appear to not see the forest for the trees. Perhaps I presume wrong but I saw no response from you considering my previous simplification/analysis (post #140).
So you derive a harmony from a specific approach, in this case there is a counterpoint of half-whole diminished versus a whole tone scale. And then you suggest someone is "fooled" because they didn't see the "logic" behind the coposition tool. However, as I pointed out before, just because it is not your intent to travel well known waters that doesn't prove you aren't. The method by which a composition is achieved, while it can be fun, novel, creative, unique, nonetheless produces a harmonic structure which in turn can be analyzed - it is the end result that really matters, not the method by which it is achieved.
So one might argue that while you were focused on creating a structure thru a methodology that also incorporates slash chords, or polytonality if you prefer, you were inadvertantly creating a relatively simple structure as far as jazz goes.
From measures 3-11 :
Fmaj9 F13/C D7b9 D7#9
Abm11 G13b9 Em11 F#7b5b9
Bmaj9
or, simplified :
Fmaj7 F7 D7alt. D7alt.
Abm7 G7alt. Em7 F#7alt.
Bmaj7
I would suggest this is hardly unique. Slightly modal with some common phrases. Not really different from much of Jobim really. Cleverly composed, maybe, but not exactly ground breaking. Of course this is a cursory analysis - if I actually played around with this for two weeks I might see it differently, but if I did it would likely be in a simpler context.
As you said, three cheers for new chord progressions, whatever they may be.
Really what would concern me with most pieces is melody. Where's the melody? Melody is a huge indicator, along with the harmony, of the structure. As far as I'm concerned chords are a dime a dozen. Often they have little use except to serve the melody. Does an audience want to listen to two hours of chord playing sans melody? If you performed the chords of the Star Spangled Banner for a sporting event, without any melody, would the crowd be inspired? Yet you could have the crowd cheering with the melody alone.
Don't get me wrong, I enjoy studying harmony, but to me it's all about the melody. Write a melody over that ballad that sticks in my head and I'll be impressed. Do the Dolphin Dance.
Edit: Rus, I just read your previous post (your analysis). Apologies for being redundant, but I was determined to look at it myself before I read another analysis. The fact that we came up with essentially the same result is kinda illustrative.