This is a wonderful start man! I love the song and arrangement. You have a way with that acoustic and rhythm. Loving it!

String jammer and starise, thanks gentlemen
 
Cian

I like the song, production, and especially the vocals. Sounds great too!

Definitely like the upbeat vibe and simplicity of the arrangement with acoustic/handclaps etc.
I think you could hold back on the bgv's and just have them come in from time to time - they are a bit too much (for my tastes)

nice... the ac gtr needs some "space" to be in.  Very mono, especially compared to the BG vocals.  Just even a room ambience would go a mile in making it part of the arrangement.
Also...maybe not pan the BG vox so extreme L/R...but spread it out, like a line of singer might be standing in.  As it is, seems there are two groups...standing on top of each other.
 
Killer drums when they come in.  Treat that gtr and your lead vox with the same enthusiasm.
Your clav is obviously right up the middle too.
so....my nits are stereo imaging and equal "spaces" for all parts.
 
excellent writing, singing and performing. 

Very nice tune!

Folks, great that the song itself is been met with good review at least.
 
Some real good feedback, Ill do this one from the ground up again at some other stage.
 
Thanks,
 
Cian

I think it's wonderful, No crits at all, BUT if I had my druthers - that bass would be busier and stronger and drive the whole thing. All in all - good stuff as always.

Manny thanks, a real bass would even be better ;-)

Listened again and enjoyed it again -- good stuff 
 
Allan
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