Lynn
Dan, this is a terrific song.  The mix is everything I would expect from you.  I particularly like the drums because they just sit so well in the mix.  The  key to this mix, for me, is the dynamics which elevates this song to a more cinematic approach.  I'm so happy I got to hear this!

cwestmont
Great as always, Dan.  I think this song works on every level. 
 
At the composition level, it unfolds and engages interest as each section comes into play.  Love the very patient transition between sections.  This is a piece that is easy to imagine as a track for an animation sequence.  The instrumentation choices are excellent. 
 
At the engineering level, the mix is pristine and each instrument has its own space.  That may be lost on the average listener, but the members of this board can easily recognize the wonderful craftsmanship that went into making this.
 
Top drawer stuff all the way around.   

Rimshot
Really good mix in my ATH M50's. The bottom with bass and kick are spot on. Really liked the synth leads. Nice mood. Well done.

SoundRegion
Fantastic stuff. Nothing to add, except stunning production. I would love to get you "open" sound.

Noisy Neighbour
Yeah, this sounds really great! Nice arrangement and mix. Actually this could also work well as a foundation for a song with vocals. ...not that there is anything missing like it is now, the lead part is carrying the song perfectly.
Good stuff!
 
Best regards,
Daniel

kloon
Nice, a bit cinematic or even game music.
Love the synthbass (with a bit of delay) that came in around 1:15 :).
 
Good stuff!!! :)
 

Leizer
Only listened to the new version:
Fantastic soundscape! Timing, reverb and mix are top notch. You keep the the interest alive though it is a instrumental song. Great work!