Hi everyone,
I  have been working on another piano piece.  It is my song for Autumn. It is a bit reflective as I was thinking of my grandmother after my grandfather passed away just over a year ago.  I  am still trying to figure out how to finish it off so it is still a bit of a work in progress.  I would really appreciate any suggestions, thoughts or other feedback that you might be kind enough to give.   As always I  really appreciate the time you take to listen.
 
[link=https://soundcloud.com/user-336417081/shadowed-time-draft]https://soundcloud.com/us...81/shadowed-time-draft[/link]
 
Thanks
John

Thoughtful piece thoughtfully played, thanks for sharing.

Very nice John!
 
Regards,
Dan

Very pretty

dcumpian
Very nice John!
 
Regards,
Dan

Thanks Dan! I am really glad you liked it. I appreciate the time you took to listen and comment.

John

daryl1968
Very pretty

Thanks very much Daryl!

John

Lots of feeling, a very good listen!
 
I listened on headphones and I found the lower register tending to overpower the upper. Do you notice this, or are me 'eadphones crappin' out?
 
I'd eq some of the lower mids down a bit. If you ran it through an eq analyzer you might see a graph that's pretty tall on any note below middle c . . . worth a check?
 
great piece, I like the many themes that wander through it.
 
cheers,
-Tom

John:
Very attractive piece.  Sounds like it could be used in a movie.  Like emerald soul I really liked all the themes.

Now that was nice !!!!! Enjoyed this piece of piano music , I can tell your well trained on the piano . Sorry for your loss , your music heals from the inside listening to it .
 
J.S. 

Lovely, moody composition, John, and very convincingly played.  Lots of feeling went into it, or so it seemed to me.