Hope you like! :)
 
https://soundcloud.com/kl...y-last-christmas-alone
 
Spotify
https://play.spotify.com/...5Dm6S9ApFZvLJ9QhhqxgyD

Boy, the vocalist sure has a good voice, and it's mixed very well here. I 'd rearrange the song to make the long intro shorter - to get the vocals happening sooner.
 
You might lower the volume on that sleigh bell, and maybe have less of it? Once you establish the sleigh bell, we know it's Christmas , so it could come back in more sparingly than it does. Whenever you drop it out, I found myself liking the song more, fwiw.
 
nice job!
-Tom

Agree with emeraldsoul about the intro but I personally am very happy to be reminded it's Christmas! I very much enjoyed this song. I often hear songs where the lyrics are almost impossible to understand. Not in this song. Who ever is singing has a wonderfully clear voice and it's a real pleasure to listen to. A great song.
 

Thank you very much emeraldsoul and lylemusic for taking the time to listen, your kind words and feedback!
Appreciate it allot! :)
 
 

Sounds well here, though those sleigh bells do get a little irritating eventually.  Thanks for sharing.

Wookiee
Sounds well here, though those sleigh bells do get a little irritating eventually.  Thanks for sharing.

Thank you very much for taking the time to listen and your feedback!
It's my first Christmas song, i will tone them down for next year. ;)

Hi Kloon,
 
I'm one of your number one fans as well.  I like your singer.  The only thing that I couldn't get past was the *early electronica* drum machine.  I didn't like the sound of the claps (quasi-gun shot?).  Also it could use some more variety in the drum track.  Rhythm is just a pet peeve of mine.

Very cool Kloon. I agree that the intro is a bit long. Good song and I like the synthy drums.

Good catchy song. I can imagine this being played on radio, almost as it is. Strong lyrics, lovely production. On good quality phones I felt the vocals needed to come up in the first part of the song, but they sort themselves out pretty quickly.

eph221
Hi Kloon,
 
I'm one of your number one fans as well.  I like your singer.  The only thing that I couldn't get past was the *early electronica* drum machine.  I didn't like the sound of the claps (quasi-gun shot?).  Also it could use some more variety in the drum track.  Rhythm is just a pet peeve of mine.

 
Hehe, thank you very much. :)
The claps are actually real sampled "hand claps", i will try to vary the drums a bit more in the future.
I really like keeping them simple.
 

daryl1968
Very cool Kloon. I agree that the intro is a bit long. Good song and I like the synthy drums.

 
Thank you very much! :)
 

Marshall
Good catchy song. I can imagine this being played on radio, almost as it is. Strong lyrics, lovely production. On good quality phones I felt the vocals needed to come up in the first part of the song, but they sort themselves out pretty quickly.

Wow, im really glad to hear. :)
Thank you very much for taking the time to listen and your kind words.
Really nice that the lyrics are strong, as english is not my first language.