This one's called white hole.  It's just for fun, but if you crit please crit on composition rather than the fidelity.  I know I'm a lousy mixer.  :D:D
 
https://soundcloud.com/da...se-76324214/white-hole

Weak is the track

sorry you don't like it, thanks for bumping though!  Don't be a bad, sad man yoda! :D:D

Not working for me David, to fractured, the ARP Arp seems completely out of place.  Sounds more like you hit record then forgot you had. 

haha!  Well you can't please everyone.

eph221
haha!  Well you can't please everyone.

More importantly David did it please you?

All my pieces are works in progress.  Mostly I just jot down binary ideas.  Anything of any value gets properly recorded.

I hear a glimmer of something in there David but not sure where you would go with it

Well, thanks for being honest.  I'll try to be more honest with y'all as well.  :D:D

Hi eph221 :),
My favourite parts are the recurring nimble bass - that's a very catchy motif - and where that's doubling with the bell sounds. It feels like that could develop adding more doubled sounds bit by bit until it burst into a huge, driving rhythmic riff. That would be very cool!
Just a dopey idea, so please feel free to ignore it :)
 
All the best as always,
LJ