Just finished recording my drum track for my newest song called " GoodBye My Friend " . My ex-wife's 18 year old medical cat passed away a month ago so this song was created for her and her best friend ( Feathers ) .
I bought her when she was a four month's old and took her home , the kitten from day one was attached to her . She died in my exwifes arm's , Feathers for three years was doing her best to live as long as she could . In her last days she could hardly stand up or eat . She had to had feed her food , her cat finally stop eating and that was pretty much the end . It was just a matter of hours watching her die , anyway I have most of the lyrics written for this song . My second verse I decided to change completely so now I have to rewrite lyrics for that verse .
Hopefully by the end of this week I will record the vocal's , right now I have almost gotten rid of this cold . Any comments on the music and Mix is most welcome , thanks for listening .
 
 
 
J.S.

The first section of the tune is perfect for the subject matter, with that pretty, poignant motif. I kept expecting that to come back, but it never did. I'd suggest making that the chorus of the song. Mix-wise, it's quite 'blurry' sounding, that may be down to Soundclick's player or the upload, not sure.

jamesg1213
The first section of the tune is perfect for the subject matter, with that pretty, poignant motif. I kept expecting that to come back, but it never did. I'd suggest making that the chorus of the song. Mix-wise, it's quite 'blurry' sounding, that may be down to Soundclick's player or the upload, not sure.


Thanks Jamesg for the comment and suggestion's , I have the lyrics written for the first section and for the Chorus section . Its the second verse, I went back and created a new second verse hoping it would work better then the other one I had  .
I will check out the mix again , it might be SoundClick not sure because after uploading I'm hearing something like what your hearing .
Anyway thanks again for the listen and comments , getting ready to start working on it now after taking my morning excerise walk .

Enjoyed it.  Very relaxing.  Thanks!

eph221
Enjoyed it.  Very relaxing.  Thanks!


Hi Eph , thanks for the listen and comments . I did make some noticeable changes in the mix , I found the one track that was creating this slight unwanted sound so I fixed that track and now I'm going back and recording a new drum track , making some adjustments in the Kit I used in the song .
The next update will have these changes I made today plus lyrics and vocals added hopefully by the end of this week-end .
Cheers !
J.S.

Took your advice and went back in and found those mix and sound issue's in one of my tracks for my first verse , remixed the whole song after fixing and also replayed the drum track for my song making some changes in the Kit I used .
Will be working on lyrics and vocals over the week-end , hopefully that will be finished by the end of this week-end .
 
J.S.

This is more or less an updated version posted for comments on my vocal mix , haven't written anything for the second verse and not sure if there should be anything or maybe I should work on a different second verse .