Freddy J
Excellent number.  You have put into lyrics what I think a lot of us are feeling.  I agree with some of the comments above --- you have melded cheerful melody and instrumentation with disconcerting lyrics. It all sounds great.
 
Well done!!!

Serious_Noize!
Daryl1968, Your tune sounds waaaay much better than this one, but it makes me think of this tune : 
 
https://youtu.be/sxf2KCSyvgQ
 
At it's time it was a very popular tune, at least for me growing up hearing it. And this one : 
https://youtu.be/IIEVqFB4WUo
 
You have a great TUNE here, COPYRIGHT IT LEGALLY if you haven't already!!!
 
Keep on keepin' on my friend........ 
 

bayoubill
I'll be damned! wait.... I Am already a Daryl fan! I Am and will always be
 
Another Great song!  Took the words out of my mouth! 

eph221
I'm Daryl's number one fan!

hanemkat
100% radio ready. The drums and percussive shots here and there are excellent sounding; not flashy, just tight and well placed.
For a moment I thought I heard a Glenn Tilbrook/Chris Difford octave melody line, but it was a doubled keyboard part! Nicely played.

thepogue
had me smiling from jump street....I think vox could come up a bit....love the wall/screw us all comments!!
 
you are a very very talented song writer!!
 
my fav for today!!
 
A++