Good song, and yeah, the vocalist is kicking...   As is the guitar solo (a bit Petrucci-ish).   Everything seems as though it's recorded fairly well, the mix just needs better clarity and separation, and maybe a tad less overall compression.   Worth it, IMO. 
 

Thank you Steve.

man, this is a great arrangement, and excellent performances,
but the mix is a bit of a mess.
 
and there are some weird dropouts during the heavy part at the beginning, that might be intentional,
but sound like the way it used to when reel to reel tape had dropouts....
 
seriously good singing, and very interesting.... everything,
but the mix.......!
 

Hi BJ,
 
Congratulations on finding a vocalist. Adds the final dimension to your works
 
I'm not going to criticise the mix as that has been done enough already.
 
Great song. Great arrangement and performance
 
I'll look out for any re-mix that you upload in the future.
 
cheers
 
andy

batsbrew
man, this is a great arrangement, and excellent performances,
but the mix is a bit of a mess.
 
and there are some weird dropouts during the heavy part at the beginning, that might be intentional,
but sound like the way it used to when reel to reel tape had dropouts....
 
seriously good singing, and very interesting.... everything,
but the mix.......!
 

synkrotron
Hi BJ,
 
Congratulations on finding a vocalist. Adds the final dimension to your works
 
I'm not going to criticise the mix as that has been done enough already.
 
Great song. Great arrangement and performance
 
I'll look out for any re-mix that you upload in the future.
 
cheers
 
andy

Thanks a lot guys.  Yea I have 2 people that offered to remix it for me.  I will post the one I like the best when its all finished. 

Agree with the other comments.  Take Bapu up on his offer.  He has mixed far more complex than this and done great work including all the CHB tracks.

I really enjoyed this!

Totally kick a$$, I loved it!  The mix sounded appropriate for the style, to my ears.  
Great guitar work!

Thanks again everyone, Im gone for the weekend but Jacob sent me his vocal stems and I will get it to Bapu on Monday.

Small update, Bapu realized it was the MP3 that was used on Soundcloud that gave it a rough sound and said the mix is actually pretty good.  I will provide a better quality link today.  I hope Monday is treating everyone well.