Hi,
 
Here is a lyric video I created. I kept it rather simple.
The music is slightly infected by the post rock virus.
You may wanna take a look inside:  https://youtu.be/uba4GVaNQLY
Or just listen on Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/us...108/take-a-look-inside
Critics welcome.
 
Regards,
Daniel

Really great song! I really enjoyed listening to it. I especially liked the guitar solos.

John

I found the noise over the introduction to be a little to much, or is that your signature intro.  Nice track the mix is nicely balanced here, some nice playing.  Thanks for sharing.

Nice song!    I liked the changes and overall arrangement, and the way you used the breakdown section.    The mix seemed just a little heavy on the hi's/hi-mids here, but had great width.

John,
thanks for listening! For the guitars I just stayed on the theme trying to build up the intensity.
Xtra thanks for the compliment on the song. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
 
Wookiee,
that reverse noise was meant to almost take over the intro until the song actually starts. I won't use this for all the songs I'll ever produce in the future, though ; )
Thanks a lot for your comment on the mix. It wasn't the easiest one to mix with all that crushing guitars, but I wanted it this way.
 
Best regards,
Daniel

Daniel:
 
That's a good song and you have a great voice.   I hope you're planning on doing something with it, because you really have something here. 
 

stevec
Nice song!    I liked the changes and overall arrangement, and the way you used the breakdown section.    The mix seemed just a little heavy on the hi's/hi-mids here, but had great width.

Thanks Steve!  Glad you you liked it. Yeah, it's a fine line between a dull and a bright mix...

jude77
Daniel:
 
That's a good song and you have a great voice.   I hope you're planning on doing something with it, because you really have something here. 
 

Thanks Jude77 for listening and your kind comment!
I guess I just keep writing and producing and put something out there every now and then just to know whenever someone want's to hear it it's there : )

Wow very cool song , music sounded great and your lead guitar playing sounded great along with great lyrics and vocals ! I could get into playing my drums to your song  , are you using some type of drum software like Addictive drums ?
Anyway the whole song sounded great , its a winner for sure !
 
J.S.

Really excellent tune, Daniel, and you put it all together quite well.  IMO vocal could stand to come up a bit, but other than that... really well done.