Kool track and a nice listen.  I agree with daryl1968 that it could stand on its own without the SFX.  
 
Ed

Was that you laughing at the end? You evil ba$tard. Great track, cool panning especially -  very coon Vangelis Jean Michael Jarre Vincent Price Elvira combo. I think I'll play it while my halloween trick o' treaters are coming up to the door! With your permission, of course . . .
 
super fun,
 
-Tom

What a great and fun piece.  I love the tempo changes that you have created.  They really change the musical scenery.  Only problem was it was kinda scary and I couldn't listen to it alone  ; > )

Thank you Ed, (ESharp) well you never know.

Thank you Tom, yes that was me laughing and have some fun on the Thirty One Ten or is that 10/31.

Thank you Freddy, glad you enjoyed it.

Some of you mentioned an alternate version without the FX, I had to add a little something to compensate for the removal of one of the FX samples.
 
The alternate version can be found here.

I liked the alternate version... Additional pads and what have you sounded good...
 
Will you be putting it up on SoundCloud?

Thanks Andy, do you think I should put it up there as well? 

Only one additional instrument added a little Korg M1 sparkling pad (tweaked of course because one has to and one can ) just to replace the sound/feel of the dripping water also to fill in some of the quite bass only sections.

This was quite enjoyable, spacy, spooky, and somewhat ambient. Great stuff John!

Hey Wookie... cool piece.  Without reading all the comments above, I'd say it has a very suspenseful/action soundtrack feel to it.  I like the heartbeat pulse you gave it.  Cool synth voice.  I listened to the version without FX.
 
Tony

Thank you Walt and Tony I appreciate your time and ears.