Mark - thank you very much for listening and for your comments! i'll continue working on the mix.
thank you John (Wookiee), I appreciate your time and comments! I'll continue working on it.
Herb, thank you for your time, the link is still good, the new mix replaced the old mix on the same link. I have soundcloud PRO which allows me to replace the wave file with the same link. I am pretty certain you'd hear two very different versions if you listened to them back to back. I do appreciate your feedback, tho and I will continue to work on the mix.
for everyone:
On this version I high passed all of the instruments up to around 250Hz (the organ and acoustic were already hi passed enough) and I HP'd the lead vocals. I also made adjustments to the EQ instituting cleaner notch filters and notch boosts between the electric rhythm and organ. I also changed the limiter on the master bus by a big amount - so much that it really made a big difference in the overall RMS and perceived volume of the song.
As a group we decided we did not wish to change the guitar solos, nor did we wish to change the feel of the song by changing the drums.
We will continue to discuss what changes we can make and try again! thanks again for all of your time and feedback!