I get a sense of introspection from this well captured and constructed piece, with a feel of movement.
Thank you for sharing.

Beautiful piece!  I hear the sense of loss and failure you speak of about the 3 min mark.
nicely thought out and sounds VERY good.  Even in my work cans, this one really shines..

Mr. FSX
 
I most certainly welcomed the opening bell tone.  Very nice.
 
For me, at 1:44, it kind of lost it's place, but then you played the bell again.
 
The playing, and the idea are certainly top notch. 
 
At places it seemed like the solo violins and winds trotted ahead of foundation very slightly.
 
Then the bell, for the third time, around 5:40, always centers the piece.  I believe that the last 1:30 of your creation is very strong.  I would listen closely to the middle 5 minutes and strengthen the continuity, and of course, you end, and I end, with a bell. love the bell my friend.
 
Jesse Q. Screed

Hey John, very lovely piece.  I really like when the bass section comes in around 1m -- that was surprising and beautiful.  I heard some Brahms type chordings in this one which are very nice.  Say, did you check out the Bartok and Beethoven (in particular the late) quartets? 
 
Very good work.  
 
Allan
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Andy - Many thanks for dropping in to listen and also taking the time to comment! I really appreciate the feedback. Glad you liked it! Thanks for listening to my other tracks on SoundCloud too!

John

Wookiee
I get a sense of introspection from this well captured and constructed piece, with a feel of movement.
Thank you for sharing.

Thanks Wookie! - for the kind words and also for the time you took to listen!

John

arlen2133
Beautiful piece!  I hear the sense of loss and failure you speak of about the 3 min mark.
nicely thought out and sounds VERY good.  Even in my work cans, this one really shines..

Thank you very much! It's nice to hear that you heard some of the feeling I was trying to create. I am really happy that you liked it!

John

Jesse Screed
Mr. FSX
 
I most certainly welcomed the opening bell tone.  Very nice.
 
For me, at 1:44, it kind of lost it's place, but then you played the bell again.
 
The playing, and the idea are certainly top notch. 
 
At places it seemed like the solo violins and winds trotted ahead of foundation very slightly.
 
Then the bell, for the third time, around 5:40, always centers the piece.  I believe that the last 1:30 of your creation is very strong.  I would listen closely to the middle 5 minutes and strengthen the continuity, and of course, you end, and I end, with a bell. love the bell my friend.
 
Jesse Q. Screed

Thanks for listening and for the thorough feedback. It is really appreciated. I will give the middle 5 minutes a good listen. I am really glad that you liked the bell too.

Thanks again
John

ABull
Hey John, very lovely piece.  I really like when the bass section comes in around 1m -- that was surprising and beautiful.  I heard some Brahms type chordings in this one which are very nice.  Say, did you check out the Bartok and Beethoven (in particular the late) quartets? 
 
Very good work.  
 
Allan
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Thanks so much! I am glad you liked the bass part. I will try to listen to Brahms. I meant to thank you for pointing out the Bartok and Beethoven quartets. I have been listening mostly to the Beethoven so far. I see what you mean, about them. I really like number 15, but they are all great. I have only scratched the surface so far with the Bartok quartets, but I will be listening to them too. Thanks again for the kind words!

John

Firesong X

ABull
Hey John, very lovely piece.  I really like when the bass section comes in around 1m -- that was surprising and beautiful.  I heard some Brahms type chordings in this one which are very nice.  Say, did you check out the Bartok and Beethoven (in particular the late) quartets? 
 
Very good work.  
 
Allan
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Thanks so much! I am glad you liked the bass part. I will try to listen to Brahms. I meant to thank you for pointing out the Bartok and Beethoven quartets. I have been listening mostly to the Beethoven so far. I see what you mean, about them. I really like number 15, but they are all great. I have only scratched the surface so far with the Bartok quartets, but I will be listening to them too. Thanks again for the kind words!

John

 
Brahms is da bomb