Hello mgh

mgh
you have a unique sound going on here. got a bit samey after a while though the bass change ups were welcome. mix is clear if a little narrow.

Yes, I think it does get a little samey.  I don't consider it my best effort by any means but I do like it much.  The things I like most about it is the electric when it plays chords rhythm.  It sounds like steel ripping apart, to me anyway.  Thanks for you comments, they will help improve.
 
Jesse Q. Screed

Whispers of the ghost of a young Bowie :)
 
Bill

Cookie Jarvis
Whispers of the ghost of a young Bowie :)
Bill

The digital equivalent of a mad woman in the attic.
 
Thanks for listening Bill.  Your comment sent me on the quest for early Bowie music.  I had never heard that music before.  If I could make music half as good as him, that would make me happy. 
 
Jesse Q. Screed
 
 

Shouldn't it be *half as good as he*?

Hey Jess -- this is a good demo for your song -- the mix is open; the drums and guitar sounds good and the vocals sit right where they should.  !!
 
Allan
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Jesse,
 
Scraping & dissonant groove, here. Neil Young meets Captain Beefheart? 
 
Your stuff is original, minimalistic, and unique.
 
 
It is what it is.
 
Stay with it. I think you are on to something, here.
 
Cheers,
 
Bert

Jesse,
 
Scraping & dissonant groove. Neil Young meets Captain Beefheart? 
 
Your stuff is original, minimalistic, and unique.
 
 
It is what it is.
 
Stay with it. I think you are on to something, here.
 
Cheers,
 
Bert

eph221
Shouldn't it be *half as good as he*?

I'm not sure, why don't you get back to me on that when you get a definitive answer. We'd all like to know.
 

ABull
Hey Jess -- this is a good demo for your song -- the mix is open; the drums and guitar sounds good and the vocals sit right where they should.  !!
 
Allan
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Yes, this is very much a demo.  Thanks for taking the time to listen.
 

Bert Guy
Jesse,
Scraping & dissonant groove. Neil Young meets Captain Beefheart?
Your stuff is original, minimalistic, and unique.
It is what it is.
Stay with it. I think you are on to something, here.
Cheers,
Bert

Yep, this fruit is not quite in demand at this market.  Thanks for the comment.  I will stay with it because it is the only way I can go right now! You encouragement is encouraging.
 
Jesse Q. Screed
 

 
Cool one Jesse. Felt like a seamless mix of jazz and soft rock to me. Drums really catchy here...

Cool as usual but for some reason I think it's a little TOO "low fi" - like you are trying hard to leave the edges rough? I'd vote for a little more polish, and more bass level, because this song I think is very good and very worth it.
 
Lyrics, melody, vocal delivery, pace - all great.
 
cheers,
-Tom