Jesse Screed
StriJam,
def a great song and effort.
 
I'm wondering though, if maybe it is a bit busy.  I think you might want to pull  some of the instruments back in places.  Might it lend a little more emotion to the piece?  I just seems like it goes like a jackrabbit front to end.
 
However, the capture, performance, and rendering, are top motch.
 
Very skillful by all involved.
 
Jesse Q. Screed
 
 

stevec
That's some good stuff.   Very well done, everything sounds pretty good here.  And the chorus is quite catchy!

fjz
Very nice!  Great performances by all!