I love this.  Fun!  Needs some help, including perhaps a bit of the psychiatric variety.  The time changes into the 4/4 heavier sections make me smile every time.  Look forward to hearing this with some more "clarity".

Still my Fav! :)
 
Peace!

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jamesyoyo: Wow, that's a very kind and generous offer!  If I ever get brave enough, I hope to take you up on it. I will work on getting the nerve together.

 
Don't be down on yourself, of course you are brave enough...you posted stuff on a fair but tough board for comments.
 
Your stuff is cool and interesting, full of endless possibilities. You only need a little production guidance and help to make it shine some more.

Walt Collins: If you can recommend a shrink who knows how to get me into common time permanently, please divulge. I'd be very grateful. Thanks for your comment - it made me laugh! 
 
Passive Drift: You make me so happy! Thank you so much for your support. It means a lot. :)
 
jamesyoyo: If Walt Collins does what I asked him to do, I may become confident enough to take you up on that great offer sooner than anticipated ... seriously, I'd love to, but I'm afraid you'd be disgusted with the material.
 

Another cool one, Laura! You have a very deft hand with  harmony, I bow to your mastery. I like the overall sound quite a lot but some additional clarity would help with understanding some of the lyrics. Seriously though, whatever issues you have with mixing pales in the face of your talent. You should write an opera or something.

thank you kevinwal!
If I wrote an opera right now, the book would feature the theme "Life - Ya Think it's a Cakewalk?" 
I'm pretty sure it wouldn't zoom to the top of the charts :).
 
 

Just coming back around to this...   I do think your changes were all positive.  Yeah, it could still use a little fixin' here and there, but the overall mix does seem to sit better than I remember from the first go-around.   It's another unique song in the Laura collection.

A little work on the mix and it should be fine. I love the guitar and bass lines on this one.