That is some good stuff, John!  I love the way the verses progress to the chorus, really nice.    Mix-wise I think the guitars may be "edging" out the vocals just a bit.  I can actually hear the vocals just fine, but I think Sven may be on to something with brightening those up a little, but without conflicting with the guitars. 
 
Oh...  and raise the level on that lead guitar!!!!    

Thanks Steve!  I will definitely go back an have a listen to the mix soon.  I've been getting some separation from the tune so I have fresher ears when I go back in.