This is a novelty song that I just want to get done, I hate working on it but I can’t help myself…
This is my 2nd full production. https://www.reverbnation.com/passivedrift
Not even my style. I wrote it in (2011 Copyright) (Recording 2016 Copyright) “Passive Drift Productions”
This is Ver. 2
Any advice would be cool….
 
Peace!

Mixing crits:
Vocal is buried (something about "wheel" is all I can catch)
Almost no bass or kick (lacks bottom)
Sounds very mono-ish (no stereo spread)
No dynamics, same old same old through the whole song
 

bapu
Mixing crits:
Vocal is buried (something about "wheel" is all I can catch)
Almost no bass or kick (lacks bottom)
Sounds very mono-ish (no stereo spread)
No dynamics, same old same old through the whole song
 

Thank you :) Just what I thought as well... I used that "Headphone Sonarworks" Not much help... lol
Did you hear the clipping?

Passive Drift

bapu
Mixing crits:
Vocal is buried (something about "wheel" is all I can catch)
Almost no bass or kick (lacks bottom)
Sounds very mono-ish (no stereo spread)
No dynamics, same old same old through the whole song
 

Thank you :) Just what I thought as well... I used that "Headphone Sonarworks" Not much help... lol
Did you hear the clipping?

Did you export with Sonarworks engaged? I'm sure you know this but you're not supposed to export with it engaged.
 
I did not hear clipping, that doesn't mean it wasn't there

bapu

Passive Drift

bapu
Mixing crits:
Vocal is buried (something about "wheel" is all I can catch)
Almost no bass or kick (lacks bottom)
Sounds very mono-ish (no stereo spread)
No dynamics, same old same old through the whole song
 

Thank you :) Just what I thought as well... I used that "Headphone Sonarworks" Not much help... lol
Did you hear the clipping?

Did you export with Sonarworks engaged? I'm sure you know this but you're not supposed to export with it engaged.
 
I did not hear clipping, that doesn't mean it wasn't there

Yup. Same as Arc 2... just something off. It could be me... ha! It's just flat... Still learning anyhow... :)
Thank you..
Peace! 

Very catchy song! And I love your voice; the depth is very attractive. I like the whole attitude of this song. I'm not qualified to talk about the mix, but the material is really great! 
 
LJ

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Very catchy song! And I love your voice; the depth is very attractive. I like the whole attitude of this song. I'm not qualified to talk about the mix, but the material is really great! 
 
LJ

Thank you! :)

Seems to have some potential, but I would pretty much echo Bapu's comments: mix needs a bunch of work.

echo what was prev stated mixwise.  I like the tune....has great potential for that style.  Is hard to stop messin' with certain things at certain times.  thx for the share.   

Thanks to all, A remix soon... :)