https://soundcloud.com/da...se-76324214/mary-panic
 
Try this!
 https://soundcloud.com/da...-76324214/mary-panic-1

Yo, eph22, the link doesn't work.  I really wanted to hear this.  If the song is as good as the name, it should be awesome.  I wish I would have thought of that name, Mary Panic.
 
Jesse Q. Screed

Hey jesse,
 
Try this.
 
 
 
https://soundcloud.com/david-sprouse-76324214/mary-panic-1

That was very interesting.  It took me a while to get into it, but I see what you are doing there.  This will certainly challenge some of the listeners.  I like it because it really makes you think.  I hear some Devo, Brian Wilson, Music for Plants, and a dose of mayhem.
 
I think you should change the name to Mary Mayhem
 
and let me steal the Mary Panic name.  What do you think?
 
Jesse Q. Screed
 
 

I'm so relieved, someone likes my song on sound cloud! :D:D

No,  seriously Jesse thanks for the thoughtful comments.  Titles can't be copyrighted so you can use it!
 A little warning to others:  you can not un-hear this!
😂

Groovy sound and a great mix, no worries there. I dig the cool key modulation, kinda makes you dizzy. Sweet little guitar bit toward the end too. And like Jesse says, killer title!

Early Depeche Mode influence I think. Timing issues from the start stopped me getting into this though. The 8th note organ chords particularly, are off time with the kick drum pattern, and the repeat delay on the arp isn't quite right either.

Sorry, David, but I just couldn't get into this one.  It just felt like all the timings were off from one instrument to the next.

philz
Sorry, David, but I just couldn't get into this one.  It just felt like all the timings were off from one instrument to the next.

I think that's the point. lol
But what do I know ;) about panic...
I was hoping for words. Normally I would say (my pet peeve)
“No words” “No title” but this works for me!
 
Peace to all…
Dave