Hi Folks,
 
here is my first lyric video  ...could you please be so kind and check for spelling mistakes...?
 

 
Thanks ahead!
 
Best regards,
Daniel
 

No spelling mistakes . Song and mix sound good, quite an '80's rock sound, but nothing wrong with that!

jamesg1213
No spelling mistakes . Song and mix sound good, quite an '80's rock sound, but nothing wrong with that!

Thanks, jamesg1213 for listening and commenting! 
This song means quite a lot to me, so I'm glad you accept the mix. I wrote and recorded it a couple of years ago and never touched it ever since. 'Just mixed it recently without spending to much time on it. Can't help the '80's feel ...
...and I'm sooooo happy you didn't find any spelling mistakes... : )
 
regards,
Daniel

hi Daniel i like your song good music & vocal!
 
cheer
martin

Are the lyrics available? 

Took a listen to it. It seemed well mixed and I enjoyed the song. I felt the pans and instruments were well balanced in the mix. Not quite my style of music, but I don't judge skill by my taste in music. Well done brother.

The mix works here, thanks for sharing.

Good job.  Good vocal and playing.  Mix works really well.

I echo James' thought on the mix and tune.
 Not a spelling error per se, but "yourself" is one word. It appears at 1:01 and 3:07 as two words.
Other than that, it looks and sounds good.
Any plans for laying in some video behind the script?
 

Very good. Mixed well IMO.