This is my new song at its new link (fixed drum weirdness in 2nd section), "Lizzie Lyzo". Here goes nothing: 
 https://soundcloud.com/la...s-and-all-2016-final-e
 
Hope you like it :)
LJ
Edited to change the link. I took the reverb off the harmonies at the end and I think they sound way better! Sorry to keep changing it!
 

Nice track, love the way you record your vocal. Very airy, but with lots of clarity.
 
Your songs all have the stamp of your musical style, which truly marks them as yours. This one is certainly no exception. One comment, when you do the slow down section, the drums sort of lose their cohesion. You maybe want to either remove them completely or simplify the drumming at that point, like just using a kick. Just a thought.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Thank you very much! Yes, right after I posted the song, I noticed that I had overlooked the drums in those three measures there (actually I did fix them but forgot to save!) and cringed but I was too tired to fix them again last night :) Thanks again, Dan :)
LJ

Interesting, as noted by Dan you definitely have a unique quality to your compositions, sounds well here apart from the drummer falling asleep on the job thanks for sharing.

Thanks, Wookiee! I wish I'd had another listen before I posted the song. I would have realized that I somehow neglected to save the fix for the drums in those three measures. I probably won't get a chance to fix it today or tomorrow because of 12-hour days at work. I guess I was in too much of a rush to get it done over the long weekend :( Let that be a lesson to me!

Here is the link for the fixed version of "Lizzie Lyzo" :
 https://soundcloud.com/la...s-and-all-2016-final-e
:)
Hope it's an improvement!
 

I don't have any suggestions for you; just wanted to say I really enjoyed listening to this truly unique song. The lyrical starts and stops seemed to me kind of stream of consciousness. Loved the guitar accompaniment throughout. Very well done!

Very good work. I liked all about it and the slightly longer duration didn't even bother me because it was such a nice listen.

Thank you, bjornpdx and kakku, for your very kind comments. It's very good of you to take the time to listen and then take even more time to write. It means a lot!  Thanks :)
 

Yup...  this is so you.   
 
The vocal delivery and lyrics, as always, are so not the norm, which is a good thing.  And as Dan mentioned the airy quality to your voice and the way you've captured it works so well in your compositions.   Do you double track most of the leads?  I hear a lot harmonies coming in and out but otherwise hard to tell for sure. 
 
The acoustic also sounds great, nice chord changes.