It's cool for sure! I'd also take just a bit of compression off the vocal, or leave it on and cut/dip just a little something in the lower eq on it. ?
The vocal is very very forward in the mix, and therefore any pitchiness is exposed. I'd say she's on pitch about 97% of the time - the long-held notes could be looked at. Her voice has a really nice, comfortable quality to it, for sure.
The ending just kind of bails out, maybe someone has an idea there?
cool tune, good share!
-Tom