Thanks for the support again. The promoting has taken its toll on me writing new music. Every blimming day begging for votes. In fact, If you could vote again for the next 3 days I'm sure I have a very real chance of winning this baby. If you get a chance compare the top ten and let me know how mine stacks up against the rest, and be honest please :)
Are you gonna get Ghostwriter?

Just voted again :-) But I'm not sure if I'll have a chance to really check out the others and give you any notes... Heading out of town for a film festival this week and gotta get  ready and stuff.
 
I'm not sure if I'll get Ghostwriter... It's a definite maybe... I was planning on Output's Rev being my next purchase...

Good job on the music polarbear.  It fit very well.  Sometimes it is good to shorten long held notes under dialog.  At times, long held notes can diminish the action in the film/video as we mentally follow it.  Shorter phrase sometimes can keep things moving especially in action scenes.  Just a thought for you.
 
 

Thanks for the notes! I'll definitely keep it in mind. Actually in this particular case the director asked me to add some longer notes during that part with the guy by his computer and the first glowing eyes bit... So that's why I did those long notes.... But yea, definitely good feedback. Thanks.

polarbear
Just voted again :-) But I'm not sure if I'll have a chance to really check out the others and give you any notes... Heading out of town for a film festival this week and gotta get  ready and stuff.
 
I'm not sure if I'll get Ghostwriter... It's a definite maybe... I was planning on Output's Rev being my next purchase...

Well in any case, it's there for you at 50% off if you do decide. Thanks for the extra votes. I ended 3rd. Waiting on the judges now. Positive thoughts needed by all :)

Great stuff

The music starts out ok, but for me it never really went anywhere. It ended when I was expecting it to really blow up. To my ears the structure is a bit lazy as it stays pretty much the same through out. Then again that is somewhat of fault of the video as it lacks "sharpness". Would have loved to hear the music go way more dramatic around 1 minute, the drums that come in didn't do the job for me. For me it's missing the climax/cliffhanger to really reel me in.
 
My two cents. :)

Very cool, I liked the video and the music.
 
Keep up the great work!
 
Jesse Q. Screed

Thanks for the replies guys!
 
And to Kuusneimi, yea this was made 2 years ago (not sure how it popped back up and got all these comments today haha), but I'd like to think that if I was approached with this same project today I'd probably make some changes for the better, especially in the climax :-)

Interesting and creepy video, enhanced by your excellent background track.  Personally I think the music could have been more present (especially higher freqs) without taking away from the video content.