thanks all again to all replys! super nice of all of you!
(dense) 100% nailed it man, that's the word that describes it best, and busy.
some breakdown....another excellent piece of advice!!
how come when you are mixing you cant figure it out...but a year later you can? LOL
I bet every singe one of you know exactly what I mean.
thanks again gents....I gotta remember to show up on this site more often.
Xb
 

This song reminds me of the Allman Bros band when the lead guitar is playing.
 
 
Yeah, I heard that "density" spoken of above. Heavy on the mids.   I think just pulling the mids down a bit would lighten it up a bit and that would be a good thing. A move in the right direction.

Yes... you answer a question posed.... MC5 does have volume envelopes in it.   So yeah, use them to get the dynamics happening. Drop a few things down or better yet out, in the verses and bring them back appropriately in the chorus.   Envelopes are also really useful for the vocals. It's a matter of taste and all that sort of stuff, as far as are the drums too loud or are the vocals too soft..... but envelopes let you tweek that stuff easily. Who knows, you might already be using them.
 
Good song.

Really good tune.  I liked everything about it.  I usually key right in on flat or sharp vocals but was enjoying the overall sound and didn't hear them.  I guess that is good and bad.  Well, it was nicely done and welcome to the site.  I would find the time to listen to some of the music up here and take the time to reply.  It's what makes the board go round. 

Just to +1 the above - great song!  Really well done.    I think if you can clean up with the mix a little and provide a little more "space" it could really breathe nicely.  Those Allman Bros-ish guitar lines fit great and the vocal harmonies are really cool...
 

Welcome and nice tune....enjoyed it.   The mix on my phones seemed well balanced..(.though I don't have the level of ear/critique ability as many of the talent guru's here...I too am here to learn ;o))...   Her vocals(Alice correct?) are very "Natalie Imbruglia" sounding...very pleasant.... I see some of her other jamz on that site...pleasant all around...thx for the share.

Nice mix. Great stereo spread. Thick. Good job!

Very nice performances and excellent mix, for a fantastic and fun song.  This sounds like it'd be an excellent set encore.  Get the audience clapping their hands over their heads and chanting TRAIN TRAIN.
 
I thought I heard a little allman brothers guitar behind the mix in there at one point. :)
 
Poked around in some of your other tracks, very pro!  I'm hearing definite Zappa influences.  Love it.