Something I'm working on deadline is tomorrow...feedback appreciated...

https://soundcloud.com/cclarry/break-me-down

Love the song.  The lead vocal is way too buried on my setup. It sounds like you're singing full voice into a microphone from about 15-20 feet away.  I have lousy speakers though. 

THAT's the kind of feedback I need...thanx! 

as above - main vox are far too far down, and also during this the snare gets lost. kick is fine, but i'd bring up the snare a couple of db too, or at least eq it a little brighter with a slight volume increase. can you widen the cymbals and get them out of the centre? though this may be an mp3 conversion artefact.
otherwise sounds great

Ok...fixed somewhat...

that's perfect!  Really great tune.

Sounds good!  I want more bass. The low end of the kick is perfect. Can't hear the bass notes.
Mids and highs are right on. 
Not too compressed. Drums are just right and the guitars sound killer. 
Try to fix the bass. 
Like it lots.
 

Hi Larry, I really liked your song. I wasn't getting a good listening experience on my laptop before and after the fixes so I switch over to my Bose QC35 headset and boy didn't they bring your song to life. Strong kick and snare throughout, killer guitar. If there was one thing I would say the high hats may be a little loud in the chorus as it seems to drown out the vocal a little. Killer song, love it.
 
 

Thanx Guys....did some more work on it and appreciate
GREATLY the feedback...it's for a contest...so I'm trying
like crazy to do a good job being a terrible Mix Engineer...LOL

Ok pulled the bass forward in the mix and tried
to keep everything balanced...