Laura does electric guitar!  
 
Like your previous songs it's so non-typical in chord progression, arrangement and melody. And yet it still manages to sound just like you.   It's got the LJ stamp for sure. 
 

dcumpian, I'm going to make a note of everything you say and do my best to apply it to my next song. Thank you very much for taking the time and trouble to offer such valuable suggestions.
 
stevec, thanks once again for your positive and encouraging comments. They always make me smile.
 
LJ
 
 

teh mix balance is much better in this one. Unfortunately the electric guitar is over-gained and a bit crunchy which doesn't quite gel with the rest. i think dcumpian is right, it's mix compression which is affecting the guitar as well as the cymbals at times. but as a whole mix to me this sounds much better.

Thank you, mgh ! I very much appreciate your critique. I just tried to remix - here it is:
 
https://soundcloud.com/laura-thomson-723335445/you-better-move-in-june-2016-g
 
 I would be anxious to know if it's an improvement :) I want to apologize for changing it so often - I'm really sorry!
 
https://soundcloud.com/laura-thomson-723335445/you-better-move-in-july-2016-h
 
https://soundcloud.com/la..thomson-723335445 
 

Just listening to the mix you-better-move-in-june-2016-g sounds the best one I have heard yet much more balance.

Thank you, Wookiee ! That's a relief... thanks for listening! :)
 
 

Ditto... overall it just sounds "cleaner" and each element seems better defined within the mix. 

Original!  Creative!  Catchy!  Lyrical!  Musical!  Rhythmic!  Sweet!
 
[I don't think I left anything out -- if I did, I'll edit later :) ]
 
Seriously good, Laura.
 
Allan
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Thanks, stevec ! I've been really enjoying listening to your song, Ver Tudo. I'm proudly responsible for several of your "listens" on SoundCloud.
 
ABull, you do say the nicest things!  The only thing that could be better would be to hear you sing them with your lovely tone and great vibrato.
 

Just to let you know I listened again and would add:  Quirky!  (in a very good way).  :)
 
Allan
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