Thanks for the repeat listen, Allan :) . Sometimes I wonder if I should try to be less quirky!

What's the high ringing sound that happens at 8 sec's and rings to about 12 secs ? a finger bell ?  a triangle ?
 
Kenny

Hi, Kenny! There aren't any finger bells or triangles, so I'm not sure what you mean, unless it's clapping? There's also a note that I'm repeating quickly on acoustic guitar at that point and variations on that throughout - maybe that's it? I'm sorry if it's annoying you - maybe it wasn't the best idea.
LJ

Hi Laura ,
Over here , when I play your song at a moderately loud level in my monitors at around 8 seconds there is a high pitched sound that sounds just like a percussive hit that takes up in the high end spectrum of your tune ...
Right speaker ..it happens right when you say "want too" ...right after / around the" too "part ...
It lasts for a few seconds and it It sounds just like it is ringing ...could it be a conversion  artifact ?  
 
Kenny

I'm sorry, Kenny. Your ears and/or speakers are likely much better than mine, because I can't hear what you mean.  :(

Hey Laura, you're one of the better singer/songwriters to ever grace this forum.  Please, please don't be lured into worrying about every little nit here and there that others will point out (of course, unless it's something that's impeding the demo's ability to present your song).  It always reminds me of the old saying  "Other than that, Mrs. Lincoln, how did you like the play?"
 
Your demos sound more than fine and allow listeners access to your unique artistry. :)
 
Allan
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ABull
Hey Laura, you're one of the better singer/songwriters to ever grace this forum.  Please, please don't be lured into worrying about every little nit here and there that others will point out (of course, unless it's something that's impeding the demo's ability to present your song).  It always reminds me of the old saying  "Other than that, Mrs. Lincoln, how did you like the play?"
 
Your demos sound more than fine and allow listeners access to your unique artistry. :)
 
Allan
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here, here!  Which brings up one of the essential elements of great songwriting:  empathy.  AND,  how do you get thick skin while at the same time actually caring about others!  It's a catch 22.  Keep creating, please!  Additionally,  if a composition is compelling what difference does the fidelity make  (as long as it's within reason)?  :D:D

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I'm sorry, Kenny. Your ears and/or speakers are likely much better than mine, because I can't hear what you mean.  :(

Hi Laura ,
I think there may be a missed signal happening here between us  ....
FWIW ,
I have listened to every version of your song as it has undergone all the various adjustments you have made .
I'm not looking to find fault with your Music ...emotionally it may feel that way ..but that is not my intent ...
For all I know what I'm hearing could be your next door neighbors microwave going off while you were recording a part of your song while using a microphone  .... I hear it just like I've heard car doors slamming and dogs barking when I record over here using a mic .
Lets try to get past it I'm not attacking you
 
As far as your creativity and your Music goes , I am truly  a fan of what you do and I happen to hold you in very high esteem ...
 
all the best,
 
Kenny

Hi again Kenny,
 
I'm embarrassed and confused that I can't identify the irritating sound you mean, but I never thought that you were attacking me, just that I was a dumbbell for not being able to figure out what you were referring to!
 
You were the one who talked me into having the nerve to post here in the first place, and for that and for your continued support I will always be truly grateful - it's been a giant step for me and I'm still floundering in many ways while I struggle to adjust to the idea that anybody besides me would ever listen to or even want to listen to anything I do.
 
Allan (ABull), your support and encouragement has also been fantastic and very, very much appreciated. Like you say, having a songwriter who knows what he's doing on your side can be wonderfully uplifting. Sometimes I think you must have ESP because your comments come so close to replying to my thoughts.
 
eph221, speaking of perceptive comments, your reply a few posts ago was an incredibly sensitive and kind one .... you seem to be a very good soul.
 
I know I haven't done anything to deserve to have such nice people take the time to comment here on this thread, but I do know how lucky I am that you did.  I also know how much pleasure I get from listening to your music, each one of you. SO much talent floating around here - it's really something special. That may seem facile, but it's true. 
 
LJ
 

Great song you have here!
I'd like to hear a mix with the guitars turned down, the drums up and the vocals way up.