One more try at this (Aug. 8th): https://soundcloud.com/laura-thomson-723335445
Any better, or still no good?
 

This is a very good demo of a very good song.  
 
Allan
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Thanks so much, Allan. I guess I've lost some confidence lately... maybe it's better to take the plunge and record/post something else soon. Or not. 
 
There's lots lined up to do; I just don't know any more if any of it is any good. My ears seem to be leaky and the stuff I have on deck seems to be suspiciously weak.
 
My Grade 1 or 2 teacher wrote on my report card: 
"[She] should not worry so much about making mistakes." Yikes.
 
I appreciate your support more than you know.
LJ

In a just world...you (and me) would be a known singer/songwriter.  But I'm sure I don't have to tell ya -- ain't no justice in the music world. 
 
Allan
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Cool odd-ball tune. Enjoyed the composition as well as your performance. Don't think I've heard anything like this before - it has that strange vibe like a Jane Siberry (not that it sounds like her). Enjoyed Shadow Boarder as well!

Love it.  Nice guitar work, and the claps.  This could easily be used for a dating sight, or matrimony site.  Excellent 3X!
 
Very original.  Still can't get over the awesome guitar.  I think I would move in with you, right now.  I can cook, and I'm handy, but I'm allergic to cats.  That was great.  Bookmarking your SC page right now.
 
Jesse Q. Screed

Good one.
 

Hey Lizzie, if that is you, I have seen your brain.  If it is not you, well, I have seen your whole life.  If I am Lizzie, then I didn't know until now.
 
You have a great brain. 
 
And you music is cool.
 
You are obviously taking a breath, so when you exhale, post another song Laura.
 
Jesse Q. Screed

Allan, Mannynyagain and Jesse Screed,
 
I can't thank you enough for all the encouragement and the smiles. It's meant a lot to me. 
Now, as a punishment :), I'm about to take a deep breath and post a new (some-kinda) song.
Uh-oh! :)
LJ

Everyone covered the in/outs of your mix pretty well....I enjoyed the song....wild flavors going on ...sounded full and tasty on my phones...your vocals are deff enjoyable to listen too....thx for sharing  ;o)