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  • Factory Yoyo presents: Sugar Moon (p.3)
2016/06/21 10:42:24
philz
Interesting tune, James, I can see why this would have been an on again off again project.  Loved the bass line and the croaky vocal.
2016/06/22 16:11:20
Guitarpima
Very well done. I like the change to the faster section. I'm not sure I like the transition back to the initial tempo but that's just subjective.
 
Excellent work!!!
2016/06/23 12:43:15
daryl1968
Very cool James - reminded me of the Doors in parts (a definite compliment in my book)
2016/06/25 07:56:31
jamesyoyo
I appreciate the compliments, guys.
2016/08/24 16:07:18
Unknowen
 
Now see, when I comment on your song you know I'm being honest...
Great intro hook! You start out going a bit psychotic! I love it! more like a lunitic "get it" moon... lol 
There is some odd gtr stuff going on under the vox 40 – 50 seconds that needs to be cut or lower in the mix. I don’t like the solo hunk…1:49 – 2:00 pre vox.. I would go straight to the sugar moon vox… the dead space is cool but the silence is not set to the right time for the rest… I would hang the guitar out after some of the verse sections as well, you seem to cut the guitar when the words stop.
You slipped out of the psychotic feel… :(
It could use some accent twangy notes randomly placed… 
 
I don’t want to p in your coffee… ;) Just me...
Peace!
2016/08/24 22:55:51
fjz
Slick groove!!  Enjoyed the listen!
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