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2016/08/03 14:32:30
evadianepug
It seems that electronica artists have a longer attention span than us old blues/rock guys, their songs seem to run longer.  In this case you partitioned it well, changing up the instrument sounds.  I think you did a really nice job on this.
2016/08/03 19:41:55
Firesong X
evadianepug
It seems that electronica artists have a longer attention span than us old blues/rock guys, their songs seem to run longer.  In this case you partitioned it well, changing up the instrument sounds.  I think you did a really nice job on this.


Thanks for the compliment and for taking the time to listen to my song. Music is one thing I can focus on. I can't say the same for math though. I have a lot of respect for blues/rock artists. A lot of my favourite songs are blues or rock songs. Thanks again.

John
2016/08/08 12:26:12
stevec
Yeah, I liked that.  I'm not a huge electronica fan either, yet I do have a fondness for synth based composition.  I think this one worked really well.   I very much liked those hard Nord inspired synth tones over top of a nice groove with arps a plenty.
2016/08/08 15:04:29
Firesong X
stevec
Yeah, I liked that.  I'm not a huge electronica fan either, yet I do have a fondness for synth based composition.  I think this one worked really well.   I very much liked those hard Nord inspired synth tones over top of a nice groove with arps a plenty.


Thanks! It is a real compliment when you take the time to listen to a genre that you normally don't like. I am really happy that you liked it. Thanks for listening and the feedback. I really appreciate it!

John
2016/08/09 08:36:33
dcumpian
This is very cool, but where's the bass?
 
Dan
2016/08/10 19:23:12
Firesong X
dcumpian
This is very cool, but where's the bass?
 
Dan


Thanks -I am glad you liked it but was it lacking in bass?
Thanks again for listening.
John
2016/08/21 17:07:05
Frugaard
This was really good for my ears! Great work! :D
2016/08/22 08:12:09
dcumpian
Firesong X
dcumpian
This is very cool, but where's the bass?
 
Dan


Thanks -I am glad you liked it but was it lacking in bass?
Thanks again for listening.
John



I hear the "wub" track, but there is little to no low end in it. You'll want to layer a deeper bass underneath, IMO.
 
Regards,
Dan
2016/08/22 19:12:27
Firesong X
Frugaard
This was really good for my ears! Great work! :D

Thanks for the kind words! I am really glad you liked it.

John
2016/08/22 19:18:07
Firesong X
dcumpian
Firesong X
dcumpian
This is very cool, but where's the bass?

Dan


Thanks -I am glad you liked it but was it lacking in bass?
Thanks again for listening.
John



I hear the "wub" track, but there is little to no low end in it. You'll want to layer a deeper bass underneath, IMO.
 
Regards,
Dan


Thanks a lot for the advice. I really appreciate it. I will try adding a deeper bass.

John
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