Hey guys so I started reading the lyrics of 50 Cent of his new single "I'm The Man" and boy it sucks ass. So anyways I figure that it was not about rhyming together, but about word playing. So I for the hell of it I made what I like to call a " cover remix." Here's the link tell me what you guys think . Does it sound better than the original?


My version
https://youtu.be/InovhidLMvM

Original
http://youtu.be/p5XtvhR4oUY

I can't say it sucks ass.  I like the fact that you took something old and put a new twist on it.  I think ol' 50 went a little Q on this piece, yours is actually more musical and less free form.  Sounds like you spent more time on it than he did.  I also like the choices you made with your synths.  Fix it if you want, but you will have to explain what you think needs fixed first.  I like the fact you are pushing the envelope.
 
Jesse Q. Screed

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Ok ...ok....I bit ...... I like yours better because there is more goin' on ....and Im gonna lay a smoking guitar solo at the end game of that pup for ya  ;o)
....thank me later my man    ;o)
(ps ....i used to dig 'ol school fideee back in the day ....was cool on the scene early ...till it became a mess  lol  )
 

Remix this one ....mo better  :o)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y2ak_oBeC-I
 
....though gonna be harder than the previous i think ....add vid too ;o)

Well, I reckon yours is quite a bit better.
 
But it's not exactly my favourite genre so I'm not sure if my opinion's worth much :-)