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  • The Forest Queen (p.5)
2016/06/11 08:51:26
dcumpian
stevec
Just as I suspected...  another perfectly executed piece, from composition to mix and everything between.  If I didn't know better I would think this was commercially released.    I also really liked the sense of space - big, but not overwhelming.   Just right.




Thank you Steve! Still learning how to create spaces using reverb. On this one, I used a concert hall reverb on a bus, then added a second bus with a non-linear hall. The second is used to add subtle movement to the space. I think it worked really well blending them together.
 
Regards,
Dan
2016/06/11 23:29:06
dcumpian
jamesyoyo
Big, sweeping, playful and well-designed stuff here, Dan.
 
Loved the roll into the drum part at 3:00 or so, and the strings hitting on the beat part..




Thanks James! I appreciate the comments! I listened to some of your orchestral stuff a year or two ago and was totally floored by it. Decided I needed to try harder, lol.
 
Regards,
Dan
2016/06/12 15:24:42
Makke
Beautiful tune. Nice arrangement and orchestration. Good mix and sounds.
2016/06/13 08:46:28
Starise
I had listened to this one awhile back and just didn't have the time to comment on it. I think this one is another hit! You should write for picture. I am always hooked on a nice harp, even if it's a sampled harp. I love the way you put this one together Dan. Nice work all round'!!
2016/06/13 08:48:24
dcumpian
bapu
No crits here Dan. Except maybe the ending dragged on for about 10 seconds too long but that's just personal taste.




Thanks Ed! TBH, I questioned the second repeat myself, but decided to keep it anyway. What the hell, YOLO.
 
Regards,
Dan
2016/06/13 16:00:42
dcumpian
Lynn
Wow, this could have come from "The Lord Of The Rings".  The change at the two minute mark was a pleasant surprise.  Keep it up, Dan.  I wish that I could help you, but you are a master.  Word.




Thanks Lynn! Hey, this stuff surprises me too! I never know how something is going to turn out. It's always an adventure...
 
Regards,
Dan
2016/06/13 21:35:31
Serious_Noize!
This sounds great! The clarity on the Mix is perfect, with the highs and lows. And I'm no Mix master. Just a listener. 
This is a greatly played and sounding song. Kudos to you!!!!
 
Enjoyed hearing this one very much!!!!! Great stuff!!!!
 
Thanks for sharing!!!!!!!!!
 
2016/06/13 21:41:39
String Jammer
Very captivating. Nicely done.
(Did the fiddler trip over the rug at 1:04?) LOL
2016/06/14 14:34:35
dcumpian
Amicus717
Yeah, I liked this track a lot. Really, really nice. Builds very smoothly and naturally, and I thought the various transitions -- as the piece widened out and got more complex -- were exquisitely put together. I got a chill when the female voice drifted in around the 1:25 mark. Gorgeous. Strong melodies and counter-melodies, and the orchestral vibe at the end was great. 

Also, the mix sounded really polished on my monitors, smooth with a nice overall gloss to it. 

If I were to offer up any minor points of criticism, I thought the harp at the beginning sounded a bit too mechanical, and the string solo at the very beginning was a bit uneven in tone. But minor points, really.



Thanks Robert! I appreciate the kind words.
 
The harp at the beginning could have been better, I completely agree. The opening cello solo is from Embertone's Blakus Cello. While I want to love their Intimate Strings Series libraries, I have found it difficult to get a consistent tone from them. Compared to the new demos for Cinesamples Solo Cello, for example, they are just too organic and difficult to control. I like them, but I don't love them. In comparison, the solo violin was from Chris Hein and it was a joy to play.
 
Regards,
Dan
2016/06/15 08:34:43
dcumpian
emeraldsoul
Easily would fit into a Corrs set. It would even sound good if you were drinking Coors. with Enya.
 
Dan, I appreciate most of all your composer's sensibilities - you find the sweet spots in the arrangement to add and subtract the little motifs - ending up in a most pleasing whole.  And then, your mixing skills are some pretty considerable icing on the cake.
 
Very well done and conceived! Glad to know you are a weekend warrior, there's hope for me!
 
One small idea would be the harp at the very beginning, I listened on headphones, it has some upper frequency crispy wispy artifacts going on. Or, more likely with your mixing skills, I need new headphones.
 
cheers,
-Tom
 




Thanks Tom! The wispies on the harp are coming from the reverb. Didn't survive the mp3 conversion. :(
 
Regards,
Dan
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