Beagle
Hey Jarvse - this is really cool!
 
the "synth" melody is a little "stiff" tho - this will be better when the vox arrive, no doubt!
 
love the crunchy guitars, love the build up before they come in
 
nice stuff!

thank you

WOW MAN!!!! Version 3 sounds so much better, the clarity sounds great to my ears. 
 
Not sure if I've mentioned it but I really like the music/song a lot also! I'm old, so it reminds me of the band Yes in a few of their tunes, and that's mean in a good way where compliments go. Very progressive on the song. 
 
I'm no mixmaster, but what you got going on with Version 3 sounds Awesome to my ears man!!!! 
 
Enjoyed hearing the re-do, and the originals, you have some great talent in all the mixes!!!!! 

Thanks for sharing the listen!!!! Keep on keepin' on!!!!
 
 

Serious_Noize!
WOW MAN!!!! Version 3 sounds so much better, the clarity sounds great to my ears. 
 
Not sure if I've mentioned it but I really like the music/song a lot also! I'm old, so it reminds me of the band Yes in a few of their tunes, and that's mean in a good way where compliments go. Very progressive on the song. 
 
I'm no mixmaster, but what you got going on with Version 3 sounds Awesome to my ears man!!!! 
 
Enjoyed hearing the re-do, and the originals, you have some great talent in all the mixes!!!!! 

Thanks for sharing the listen!!!! Keep on keepin' on!!!!
 
 

thank you so much.

I really liked that - it does have a sort of "dark Christmas holiday" feel to it, almost sound-track like to an extent.   About the only change I might suggest is varying the velocity on the piano arps, particularly when they're played alone, for more "feel".    Otherwise I look forward to hearing the vocal stylings of Zargg. 
 

stevec
I really liked that - it does have a sort of "dark Christmas holiday" feel to it, almost sound-track like to an extent.   About the only change I might suggest is varying the velocity on the piano arps, particularly when they're played alone, for more "feel".    Otherwise I look forward to hearing the vocal stylings of Zargg. 
 

thanks. all is up to the vocal now.

The first takes for the vocal has been delivered to Øyvind (Jarsve) today.
Better late than never, I hope

here is the result.
https://soundcloud.com/oyvind-jarsve/jeg-har-en-venn-som-har-gitt-sitt-liv-060/s-RWszE
 
i dont think there is much to do on the vocal with editing and so on. its better pure than plastic.

I wouldn't change them either.   I can't understand a word, but that didn't matter - the vocals and music together really hold that slightly dark, Nordic vibe. 

stevec
I wouldn't change them either.   I can't understand a word, but that didn't matter - the vocals and music together really hold that slightly dark, Nordic vibe. 

thank you.

i made it public so there is a new link without the security code:
https://soundcloud.com/oyvind-jarsve/jeg-har-en-venn-som-har-gitt-sitt-liv-060