Leave If You Want To

2016/08/09 20:15:28

Jesse Screed

shifadoo

http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=13431071&q=hi

Jesse Q

2016/08/09 22:42:22

eph221

really great piece. Not sure what you mean by *i'm turned around on you*. I think what you MEAN is you've changed your mind, but what you're COMMUNICATING is that you're confused! (caveat, I'm not trained in psychology). Especially closing with the locust stuff...it communicates confusion, yet earlier you were saying you want her/him/it to get out of your life.

2016/08/10 07:42:06

BobF

I'm diggin your experimental stuff, Jesse ...

2016/08/10 13:54:53

Jesse Screed

BobF
I'm diggin your experimental stuff, Jesse ...

Thanks Bob.

eph221
really great piece. Not sure what you mean by *i'm turned around on you*. I think what you MEAN is you've changed your mind, but what you're COMMUNICATING is that you're confused! (caveat, I'm not trained in psychology). Especially closing with the locust stuff...it communicates confusion, yet earlier you were saying you want her/him/it to get out of your life.

Very interesting comments. I appreciate the depth of your critique. Yes, it is a confusing song isn't it? What I mean by "turned around on you" is that I'm very fond of the person, like my life was changed. But, the other doesn't have the same feelings, so I say leave if you want to.

The locust stuff was a mistake that I just left on. No real reason besides I'm JQS. I do appreciate the fact that you liked it and took the time to share your thoughts, you are good like that. My explanation probably doesn't help much...

Jesse Q. Screed

2016/08/10 15:00:42

stevec

Nah, not the least bit original.

The call and response between "leave if you want to" and the "turtabley scratching" sound was something I don't think I've ever heard before. Well, that and the locusts, can't forget the locusts. Beat that drum...