What do you guys think about it?
(Please, listen to it on your computer)
The effects that I used do not work when I listen on my phone.
 
https://soundcloud.com/kerrycharris20
 
*All My Love*

Hello Kerry, I like the song well enough. I listened to it on my computer speakers as you mentioned.  I like the beat, and the way you got the strings in there.  it reminds me of the kind of song I listened to on my late night R&B station.  I did hear the n word in there, which I guess is cool, I don't hear it much on this forum, so it caught me off guard, but for the style it fits.  I think you might be able to shorten it just a little bit, I felt that the lyrics seemed to repeat. I look forward to hearing more.  Did you use melodyne on the vocals?
 
What are you using for effects and interface?
 
Keep composing!
 
Jesse Q. Screed
 
 

Sonar (Artist) is the software that I use. The effect I use is called the (Multi Chorus) effect.

By the way, thank you for the feedback.

Nice job...    It's got a cool R&B vibe happening, and the vocals are well done.  A little dry for my tastes, but I think the chorus effect works.    I also like the sparse arrangement... even without bass it seems to work OK, though I do wonder what it would sound like with a simple deep synth bass line.
 

Yeah I like it too. I agree, a real bass line would be a plus. I think on a couple of those high vocal notes you might be hair sharp, nothing too major. Could just be my ears.
 
I like the lyrics, they get it all across.
 
What about a little reverb after the chorus effect on your vocals?
 
nice one!
-Tom

Agreed, it`s a nice song. I too miss a little bit of reverb. I like the way your vibrato goes at the end of your words.
 
Keep making music!

Thanks You All! You really made my day. I'll definitely consider everyone's advice on my next track. You guys ever want to talk music...let me know. 

Kerryoptimism
Thanks You All! You really made my day. I'll definitely consider everyone's advice on my next track. You guys ever want to talk music...let me know. 

What do you want to talk about?
 
Jesse Q. Screed