Very nice. Would do really well on a music library for licensing I would think.
 
Great job

Thanks again everyone for the comments and helpful remarks!

This to me sounded like it should be a soundtrack for a film, as noted by others it could perhaps do with a little development or something just ti ice it out.  Nicely done though well orchestrated and composed piece. Thanks for sharing and thanks for the like

+1 to the above - it pretty much sounds film-ready.   Really nice job on orchestration and articulations.   And FWIW, the result really suits the title well. 

Agree with the above comments.
 
What I'd like to add is that I think this would benefit from a wider range of intensity. Yes you have good variation with bigger ans smaller parts of the song clear defined, but to my ears the instruments themselves sound fairly similar through out the song. Particularly I think you could have the strings go way softer at times. 
 
Just my thoughts, it's still a good piece of music. :)

Great piece Dave! I agree with Tapsa that a little dynamic variation would really make it come alive, but it is very well composed, IMO.
 
Regards,
Dan