. . . and I crack open a beer, and then my wife starts complaining that she's getting cold, and I have to go get her a sweater, which is up like a million steps back to the room, which of course I have forgotten my key so I have to go to the front desk, and I get back 20 minutes later, and the seagull has knocked over my beer.
Just some ideas for part two! :)
As for your song, it's really nice. It has cool build-ups, and the synths you have bouncing around are recorded or rendered with amazing clarity. I liked the seagulls, too.
green flash, anyone?
-Tom