Thanks for listening,
https://soundcloud.com/i-woke-a-giant/you-shouldve-seen-me
 

Excellent tune and production, my only crit being that I'd like to hear the vocals a bit more prominently.

Nice tune. Needs more production IMO. The whole track comes across very low-mid heavy (muffled).

philz
Excellent tune and production, my only crit being that I'd like to hear the vocals a bit more prominently.

I'll be honest with you....the vocal didn't record well, but I was happy with how I sung it, so I kept it! It meant that it couldn't be any higher in the mix though.

bapu
Nice tune. Needs more production IMO. The whole track comes across very low-mid heavy (muffled).

Listening now, the bass is quite heavy isn't it. I think the 'muffling' comes from the vocal take being such a poor quality audio recording. Good feedback, thank you.

See, this is why I rarely comment on mixing and engineering.  I obviously don't have the ear for it.  I'm hearing a completely perfectly engineered piece, great arrangement, awesome vocals that I wouldn't turn up one tick at all, perfectly sitting in the mix, to me. 
 
Nice job on the song.  

Voda La Void
See, this is why I rarely comment on mixing and engineering.  I obviously don't have the ear for it.  I'm hearing a completely perfectly engineered piece, great arrangement, awesome vocals that I wouldn't turn up one tick at all, perfectly sitting in the mix, to me. 
 
Nice job on the song.  

Thank you! That's really encouraging to hear. I love posting on this forum because it was thanks to guys on here (including Bapu of course) that I learned how to mix. I started a few years ago making AWFUL mixes and have improved mix by mix. In the end, it still comes down to the listener's preferences/home monitors/room acoustics/mood at the time of listening/expectations of the genre etc...

Very nice song. The LUFS hits -6.5 at some places.
That is "Gym Music" loud!!! :)

Personally, it was the lyrics I really liked on this one.  I can relate.  Stellar song.  

kloon
Very nice song. The LUFS hits -6.5 at some places.
That is "Gym Music" loud!!! :)

Yeah its a loud one isn't it! Again, probably to paper over the poor vocal quality.

eph221
Personally, it was the lyrics I really liked on this one.  I can relate.  Stellar song.  

The lyrics are very personal in this one, definitely. My dad is one of my biggest fans - and these days, I'm one of his too. We didn't always have a great relationship - he's not heard this one yet, so we might have to have a chat about it! I'm really happy you can relate. Thats nice to know. 

I think your songs are a cut above and well suited to todays pop culture. If your not already gigging live you should be to build your fan base. If you don't have real muso's to back you use these tracks as backing they are very good.
I really enjoy your music. Good luck on your musical journey.