Production and sound is different with each listener.  Well the production and sound isn't, but the listener hears it their own way.  I love bass so I liked the mix.  You have a really nice voice and the song is great.  I was reading the lyrics while listening and I am a bit confused.  Doesn't matter, lyrics are cool and either mean something to you or just came out.  I've done both. I just saw the comment above about your father.  Cool, I hope that you get what you need out of the relationship.  I look forward to more of your music.

This is really nice Daylaa. Nice song and an excellent mix.
Love the squeezebox.

nice song daylaa,
reminds me of a cross between owl city style and coldplay...
i hear what others are mentioning about the vocal mix,
the vox is performed well, but the capture doesn't match the performance.
 
one thing i've learned over the years...
 
whenever i say 'can't beat that performance' when i have a capture issue,
i ALWAYS beat that performance.
 
just record it over,
but get the eq, compression, gain structure, etc, all dialed in.
 

in other words,
it's too good of a song, to let it slide.

Daylaa,
 
Good song and performances.   I think if you pull the bass back and push the Lead Vox up a bit that would make for a huge improvement.    Vocal performance is really good.
 
Regards

Ditto to the comment above - the lead vocal could use a little love, not least of which because the harmonies/BGVs panned outward sound really good.   It is a good song - as Bats said it deserves that little extra push.

I've been listening to some songs posted here today and I have to say this the very best one I've heard so far. Seriously, all technical critiques being made aside, this is a great song. Nice retro vibe with a modern appeal. Solid and fun. We sometimes get caught up in the technical side of production and we forget to ask the most important question..."Does it Jam?" This my friend does jam. The rest is gravy. 

I agree fresh.  It could be in the realm of *classics*  IMHO.  I've heard several on this website that sort of transcend pigeon holing.  He's very talented.  I'm insanely jealous.