Nice song.  Your English is better than some of the people from here!  Such an interesting tune.  The instruments translate well in English.  Respect to you for this effort.  Song is great and it is played and produced nicely.  I'm happy you found our forum. 

Very nice Olivier. Everything is very subtle and tastefully done.
My only criticism is the vocal is a little too loud and dry - needs a tiny amount of reverb (just my opinion)

really nice soft song...
agree with daryl,
to me, the voice is a bit muddy in the low mids,
and could use just a bit of 'sheen' or very high on the vocal to bring out a bit more clarity
 
a bit of reverb WOULD make it sit much nicer.
not so much that you actually hear the effect...

Hi Warren,
Thank you for listening and for your comment,I think that this forum is a cool place.

Hi Daryl ,
Thanks. I wish you are right,if I can bring the vocals up to par with verb it will spare me a good amount of time.

Hi Gonzo.
Thanks to you also for listening .
Actually I sung this song more in a songwriter spirit than in a performer's mood ( I know it is a mistake, anytime one doesn't make its best on every part of a project then it is much more work at hand to make things work alltogether.)
I will look forward applying your advice and see what comes out,or else I will have to record better vocal performance( if I can)..

Thanks again to all of you.
Cheers.
Olivier

Hi,
thanks to the insight from your last feedback ,I changed the mix by adding a little bit of verb on the voice and played a little bit around with eq.
I think I'm done with that song for now...
I really want to thank the forum members ,I truly appreciate your accurate tips and the way you share them with ease and without giving the feel that you are sitting on a higher chair than the one you are talking to(me in this case(:- ...)
Cheers.
Olivier
https://soundcloud.com/ol...eot-2/light-years-away

Olivier,
 
Very good song.   Enjoyed it..   I hear some Ringo in the vocals but would have leaned more toward Lumière in Beauty and The Beast:)  Very good.

Regards

Hi Mark,
Thank you for listening,
You must be a kind of a wizzard because I actually work in Disneyland Paris as a third party ( not as musician though..)
I did not notice it but ,yes ,there is some fairy tale groove in the things I write down, though it is not a mean ,it just happens this way.
Cheers.