Hey David, starting out I like this! It's a little "country" and I'm not a big country fan, but you've done well with this.
the organs' leslie sounds odd though (gated?)............ ping ponged! no, that doesn't sound right.
the overall mix is very compressed, I'd encourage you to back off the master limiter.
hmmm...not sure what's going on at the bridge - that was kind of odd.
key changes were too abrupt and the vocals sound like you've just cloned them from the previous key and pitch shifted them. very phasey sounding after that 2nd key change.
I think it went down hill for me when the bridge started. prior to that, I was jammin and shoppin...