cwestmont - Thanks so much for listening and for the great comments and suggestions!  I'm working on a new mix now to try to sort out the distorted/limited sound.  thanks again!
 
Adrian - thanks we appreciate every listen and glad people enjoy listening to our songs!  look for a new mix soon to iron out the issues!
 
Daryl me mate - thanks!  working on a new mix now to sort it out! 
 
Bobby - thank you so much, man!  I appreciate it the high compliments on my vocals!  and I appreciate your feedback on the mix!  I am working on tweaking things now, I appreciate!
 
Tom - thanks so much!  we really appreciate all the listens and the great feedback!  I agree with you on the drums, I had some issues with the drums other than what you've mentioned and I'm working on them and working on the mix.  thanks again!
 
thanks everyone so far!  look for a new mix soon!

New mix up this morning based on your feedback, guys!  thanks so much for your assistance!
 
same link
http://www.soundcloud.com/beaglesound/beautiful
 

For me this is a much better mix, the vocals are excellent, is it my furry ear filters or is the lead now a little stifled or perhaps over compressed, it did not leap out at me like it did before.

Good job generally chaps. 

I like it. Good voice, excellent guitar.

never heard the old mix but this sounds pretty good. i've not heard your voice for several years Reece but wow! it is much more of a rock/pop singer now rather than a choir tenor!
drums are nice and clear as is the bass but overall i think the mix could stand a little more low-down oomph.
at the start i wouldn't pan each lead so hard as it sounds a bit weird on headphones when one changes to the other.
Bv are perfect and the tune itself is memorable. superb!

John - (Wookiee) - thank you sir! I will check on the low end!  any time you mess with the limiter/compressor on the master you have a good possibility of completely changing the way other pieces sound or interact.  I often have to tweak most tracks after changing anything on the master.  thanks - I'll check on that bottom!  
 
fergusbobb - thanks very much for taking the time to listen and comment!  I'll pass on the compliments on the guitar work to the two guitarists!
 
Mark (mgh) - hey man!  thanks so much for the great words about my vocals!  yeah, it's been a while!  hope to hear some stuff of yours - do you have something here on the songs forum?  I'll go searching and see.
 
I'll check out the bottom end - like I told wookiee, whenever you mess with the limiter on the master, it can easily screw with anything and everything in the mix!
 
on the guitars - Mike had mentioned narrowing the panning on the intro guitars as well and I argued with him saying I thought it was good since they are two different guitarists and are on two parts of the "stage" but I'm talking with them again and I'll reconsider it!  thanks 
 
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thanks everyone so far!  this is a great community!  please continue to listen and comment!!!

Just got around to this juan guys.
 
Very nice.

I like it a lot!

Thanks bapu!  we appreciate your listen and comments!
 
Thank you very much, Gregg!
 
I'm working on another tweak to the mix.  coming soon!

Since I have just finished my first lyrics in english, especially nowdays I mainly pay attention to the words of a song. Here I think you have a well written lyrics and a performance that brings it to life nicely.