Hi!
This is my latest and it took a long time to finish. You may still (or probably) find some or many things to correct so I am willing to to do that if you share your wisdom here too.
P.S. the track name was first something else, quite innocent I believed but I decided to check it and the name could be understood as a slang expression so I changed it and as it was a mistake to use the earlier name I decided the current name was a fitting name to use instead.
P.S. 2 I forgot to mention that I mixed with headphones, Sennheiser 407s.
 
https://soundcloud.com/madrigal7/mistakes-2

Nice work, Annti!    Good mix of synth tones, nice melodies, and a solid groove to keep things moving.   Overall I think it's one of your more "complete" tunes. 

stevec
Nice work, Annti!    Good mix of synth tones, nice melodies, and a solid groove to keep things moving.   Overall I think it's one of your more "complete" tunes. 

Thank you Steve. I think that my new material is inferior to some of my older stuff. Although i have learned some tricks i prefer the older stuff's melodies that i have posted in Soundcloud, although some older melodies i have posted are not so good either. Anyway thank you for your comment.

Very melodic and slightly melancholy Antti, your trademark I think. This one reminds me a little of Pandora's Box by OMD. You should hook up with a singer, these tracks are crying out for vocals.

jamesg1213
Very melodic and slightly melancholy Antti, your trademark I think. This one reminds me a little of Pandora's Box by OMD. You should hook up with a singer, these tracks are crying out for vocals.

Thank you James. I gotta check out the OMD song. Imo my current tracks are not well suited for singing, although i can be wrong.

Hey, I enjoyed this -- very solid mix and a good listening experience.  Since everytime I review one of your pieces, I always go on about how you should hook up with a singer, I won't do that this time -- but I guess I just did.  :)
 
Allan
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ABull
Hey, I enjoyed this -- very solid mix and a good listening experience.  Since everytime I review one of your pieces, I always go on about how you should hook up with a singer, I won't do that this time -- but I guess I just did.  :)
 
Allan
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Hi. Thank you Allan, glad you liked. Making lyrics is probably too difficult for me and i am shy about contacting a singer.

Very nice sound Antti.  It does indeed have a nice melody line and the rhythmic beat keeps one's attention.  I agree with James and Allan that you should try your hand at adding lyrics and vocals to some of your songs.

Freddy J
Very nice sound Antti.  It does indeed have a nice melody line and the rhythmic beat keeps one's attention.  I agree with James and Allan that you should try your hand at adding lyrics and vocals to some of your songs.

Thank you for your comments.

Not really my genre, but I agree, nice mix and very listenable.