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2016/07/17 23:46:10
kakku
optimus
Not really my genre, but I agree, nice mix and very listenable.

Thank you Optimus.
2016/07/18 12:49:52
Wookiee
Another well constructed tune, some vocals could be interesting as suggested above.  Thanks for sharing.
2016/07/18 13:09:09
kakku
Wookiee
Another well constructed tune, some vocals could be interesting as suggested above.  Thanks for sharing.

Thank you for your comment Wookie. I unfortunately am unable to get vocals for my tunes.
2016/07/18 21:18:04
daryl1968
Nice melodies and synth sounds Kakku.
I also really like the way it starts. 
2016/07/19 00:51:51
kakku
daryl1968
Nice melodies and synth sounds Kakku.
I also really like the way it starts. 

Thank you Daryl. I read from a song writing tips page that it is a good idea to start a tune with chorus chords.
2016/07/19 02:11:45
emeraldsoul
I think your tune is very well mixed. I liked the little percussive elements going on near the sides. It's very pleasant as it is.
 
If you don't want to open yourself up to a vocalist (a sentiment I understand) then what about dropping in some interesting spoken word fragments? You could build up a concept that way, something to go with your really cool track.
 
It's fine, however, just the way it is. Sadly, it reminds me of Pet Shop Boys if they did instrumentals, which they very well may have, I dunno, never got on much with them.
 
cool track all the same.
 
-Tom
2016/07/19 05:48:00
kakku
emeraldsoul
I think your tune is very well mixed. I liked the little percussive elements going on near the sides. It's very pleasant as it is.
 
If you don't want to open yourself up to a vocalist (a sentiment I understand) then what about dropping in some interesting spoken word fragments? You could build up a concept that way, something to go with your really cool track.
 
It's fine, however, just the way it is. Sadly, it reminds me of Pet Shop Boys if they did instrumentals, which they very well may have, I dunno, never got on much with them.
 
cool track all the same.
 
-Tom

Thank you for your comments. Imo it does not resemble the Pet Shop Boys' style but i have listened to their music so maybe i have taken some influences from them. I would like some singer to sing some of my tunes but i am not sure if my stuff is good to sing.
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