nice opening and love how the track builds up. not sure it the electronic beats from about 1'30 work that well in this 'world' music style. at about 2 mins I was wanting a change - either a new theme or key change or pare back to one or two voices.
then it kinda repeats the same thing.
to me is soundtrack music which would work superbly to a film or game but without that visual context doesn't do enough to hold the attention
mix is good