Nice, solid, tight guitar work. Interesting riffs and change ups. And I love your humble video just hangin' in your studio, jamming in your chair. My criticism is mainly with the drums, as they are weak, low in the mix, and just not inviting me into this song at all. Metal without drums...is like Rock without roll.
I do like your guitar sound a lot, and your playing. Is that coming from that H&K behind you in the vid? I'm assuming you're mic'ing and not using a DI...