I´m not sure about the chaos at the end. Please read what was my intention in the making.
https://soundcloud.com/fergusonbbb/yellow-submarines-go-deeper-but-sometimes-must-go-up-fast
Thank you.

That works very well for the story you described. Nicely done, good sound choices, dynamics and mix.

Thanks for answering. This was a hellride in the making. After the `dancing bear`  I wasnt`sure I could better-
two months of composing your own things is not that much.
Starting it I wanted to use all the plugs stacking layering a.s.o. But then I throw most of it overboard to follow the idea-and I learned again for the 1ooo th time -LESS is MORE- but my ending  idea was confusing. But your instincts
are more clever than yourself.

Very well produced and arrangement -- the mix is pleasing as are your choices in sounds and tones.  !!
 
Allan
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Thank you so much for the feedback !!!Cheers.