stevec
Gotta agree with Mark...  vocals would put this over the top!   The guitars all sound great IMO, no surprise there, and I think the bass really fills in nicely.   Mix-wise the drums are the weak point for me, sounding a bit muffled/distant - I think the tune is worth redoing with the something newer.  You know, when you're ready to add vocals.   

Thank you! I agree with Mark on this also, I recorded this a while back, upgraded my Daw recently to Sonar Pro but I haven't recorded nothing with it yet. I'm looking at some of my old Mixdowns and thinking about doing a remake of something and taking some real time with things one song at a time instead of just throwing things out there, LOL well, I mean "NEW RECORDINGS THAT IS" LOL....
 
I never knew how bad the drums sounded until getting Session Drummer 3 with the Steven Slate stuff in it and Addictive Drums 2 with the Black Velvet set. I recently upgraded to Sonar Pro. Man, I really like their Fairfax 1 & 2 sets. I really need to get used to what I am using make use of what I got new before confusing myself with more new stuff I guess though. Sorry to be a chatter box, just really exited about playing and recording again. I've been slowly learning how to finger pick guitar and having a ton of fun with that and learning. 
 
Thanks again for taking the time to listen and comment! 

You should be excited!    Good to hear you've got new tools to use - those AD2 kits are sweet!
 
 

stevec
You should be excited!    Good to hear you've got new tools to use - those AD2 kits are sweet!
 
 

Thank you. I have the Black Velvet Kit, that's the one I chose with the Sonar Pro Upgrade and AD2. I am not thinking maybe I should have chosen the Fairfax 1 or 2 kit's. No regrets though, it is better than what I had before. Another tool in the creative fix so to speak. Although, the thing is, I don't want a bunch of clutter of things I don't use hanging around because they might collect dust when it comes to what I'm going for. 
 
This tune is so far from what I have been playing lately it's ridiculous. For me, I am all about the song. Nothing more and nothing less. 
 
I've been trying to learn how to finger pick songs lately, I have been having a ton of fun trying to learn either way. 
 
It's been fun and a great learning process. I guess. 
 
I think I need to purchase a guitar the likes of a "Telecaster" or something like that, I feel drawn to it, and wake up in the middle of the night thinking "Did the TELE just ring?", and then I realize "I don't have a TELE"........ Hahahahah Just kidding....... Yeah, I'm gonna get me a Telecaster style guitar sometime in the near future. 
 
 
Thanks again for listening and replying! 
 

Nice guitar work... needs vocals.

Very cool mate - deffo needs vocals - talk to Batsbrew about a colab - this would be perfect for his voice.
As someone mentioned, the recording is a little hot and the cymbals need some top end taking off them 

philz
Nice guitar work... needs vocals.

Thank you for taking the time to listen and reply. I originally wrote this on acoustic and adapted it to electric, and what you are hearing now was a complete re-do of 2 versions of ideas.
Thanks again! 

daryl1968
Very cool mate - deffo needs vocals - talk to Batsbrew about a colab - this would be perfect for his voice.
As someone mentioned, the recording is a little hot and the cymbals need some top end taking off them 

Thank you Daryl!!! I am going to start from scratch on a remake of this one sometime in the very near future. Yeah Bat's is Awesome, and so is Bob Oister on Vocals, but they are both too busy to bother with me understandably so where vocals go, so I guess I'll just have to wing it. 
Thanks again! 

link doesn't work Bobby or I'd like to listen!

Beagle
link doesn't work Bobby or I'd like to listen!

Sorry Reece. I am working on a re-do of a few oldies of mine like this tune and looking for a good music host that doesn't require you giving away all your rights by sharing your work or songs. So I removed this one for now.
 
I am working on some newbies also, actually, I have tons of new songs, but while a lot of people might think "just throw it out there", they don't understand that when you are a one man band you have a lot to think about and remix's or new-mixes are really hard when it's all just you.